Show no tears Hide them away Show no sorrow Only a sunny day Only smiles Never frown Things are always up Never down Bright is good And dark is bad Always be happy Never sad Show no emotion To break their heart Or you shall return Back to start
Double postage -.-
If this is to end in fire Then we shall all burn together Watch the flames climb high into the night
One because it is confusing and I guess I am the only one who gets it out of the people who have read it...so it seemed like a good idea at the time but proved itself bad.
Then the other because it is just overdone.
>< Sorry Teagan
If this is to end in fire Then we shall all burn together Watch the flames climb high into the night
Sometimes I wonder how Things got how they are now Did I just make a mistake? Was I the first one to break?
These days just pass so fast There’s no way to make them last All good things come to an end Someday the road must bend If that time comes right now Without either knowing how Then maybe the fault was not mine Maybe you just crossed the line
Somehow you were blind to see These little issues plaguing me If that’s the case, then I forgive But no longer is my heart to give
Open your eyes, and think a bit Is it time to speak or time to quit Either arms are open, or denied Whether by heart or foolish pride
These days just pass so fast There’s no way to make them last All good things come to an end Someday the road must bend If that time comes right now Without either knowing how Then maybe the fault was not mine Maybe you just crossed the line
I do not know what to say I just want to end the day Go back to things back then But that was way back when
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If this is to end in fire Then we shall all burn together Watch the flames climb high into the night
Post by TEAGAN TEAGAN TEAGAN TEAGAN TE on Sept 9, 2006 22:18:21 GMT -5
99.99% of the time, I can't even write a worthless poem.
It's like a song.....
The only problem I had reading it was "If that’s the case, then I forgive|But no longer is my heart to give." The "give"s at the end don't work for me. You could probably adjust them so the run more smoothly. >.<
Everyday my head hangs lower My feet are dragging little further Nights are getting colder And that pillow’s not so soft The work is getting harder The fights are getting louder What is there to care for anymore?
Where have the flowers gone? Where are the sun’s bright rays? There are no more dreams In these darkened days
The books are getting longer Every night there is less sleep Nightmares seem to flourish And that food is not so warm Everyone is distant Friendly chats just seem to fade What is there to care for anymore?
Where have the flowers gone? Where are the sun’s bright rays? There are no more dreams In these darkened days
Raise your head up to the sky And the stars don’t seem so bright It’s hard to write your life out When there isn’t any light
If this is to end in fire Then we shall all burn together Watch the flames climb high into the night
Post by TEAGAN TEAGAN TEAGAN TEAGAN TE on Sept 19, 2006 19:55:19 GMT -5
This one also seems like a lyric. How'd you get time to write it with school? O.o
Seven, four, seven, four, four.... It's kind of odd how the last stanza (isn't that what it's called?) only has four lines in it instead of seven. It would be nice if it had more feelings involved--I love the imagery, but this one seems like it's meant to be emotional.
I hope I'm not bugging you with my thoughts about it.
For Hayzie, a character that is sure to be missed. I am going to play this off as something Roan would write IC, so maybe I will use it IC, just wanted to post it right now ^^
For the death of a gentle friend Who was loyal to the end
Cut down in the prime of life Leaving tears, leaving strife Battle brings death in it’s wake It seems your life was it’s to take Now we sit and wonder why You had to be the one to die Why one so beautiful and kind With pure of heart and strong of mind Was taken right from our hands To the distant shadowed lands Like the bright red summer rose When winter comes, beauty goes The stars wont seem to shine as bright And permeate the endless night Without your cheery perfect smile To make the fight all the while Your friendly presence, we will miss Time with you was always bliss
I guess it’s time to say goodbye I cannot promise we will not cry Forever now, we shall grieve For one who was not supposed to leave
If this is to end in fire Then we shall all burn together Watch the flames climb high into the night
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